Survivor

He has scars she can see and some she only feels. Distrust. Paranoia. And, on bad days, the back of his hand. They are both survivors.

5 Critiques to "Survivor"

  1. Amy Tripp's critique:

    Great description of a dysfunctional relationship. Well done!

  2. Lydia Gray's critique:

    Very real, very powerful.
    Thanks.

  3. Steve Ramey's critique:

    Strong piece.

  4. Sydney's critique:

    That is so sad :( Good story.

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