A story from Thursday, September 20, 2012

Sunshine in Darkness

Her fifth birthday, she’d had cancer most of her short life yet she was joyous. Her parents took her tears, shed them behind closed doors.

3 Critiques to "Sunshine in Darkness"

  1. The following was written by Evert Asberg on September 20, 2012

    Touching story, well done!

  2. The following was written by Jan Brown on September 21, 2012

    Poignant and, unfortunately, all too real. Loved the line, “Her parents took her tears….”

  3. The following was written by E A M Harris on September 21, 2012

    Captures well the joyfulness of childhood and the sadness that often comes with adulthood.