A story from Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Stuck

“Don’t ever change—” And she’d agreed, but she was forgetting that the world might keep spinning and someday she’d want more than his smile.

5 Critiques to "Stuck"

  1. The following was written by Evert Asberg on June 7, 2011

    So true

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 7, 2011

    Asking a human to stay the same is like asking them to stop breathing. Very well done.

  3. The following was written by Lily on June 7, 2011

    thank you!!!

  4. The following was written by John Tucker on June 8, 2011

    Nicely done. A blending of the meta-physical and common sense. :-)

  5. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 8, 2011

    A wonderful story that encapsulates a common relationship dilemma.