A story from Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Stranded

Weeds lick at the roadside cross, savoring the dereliction. Cars hurtle past. A lonely soul yearns for a ride home.

8 Critiques to "Stranded"

  1. The following was written by Milo James Fowler on June 27, 2012

    A vivid morsel — nicely done.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 28, 2012

    Sad and spooky.

  3. The following was written by Louisa on June 28, 2012

    Heart breaking, with his death he won his freedom

  4. The following was written by Stacy Post on June 29, 2012

    What a lonely portrait! Well done, Madeline!

  5. The following was written by Jan B. on June 30, 2012

    Masterfully written!

  6. The following was written by Madeline Mora-Summonte on July 1, 2012

    Thank you all so much for reading and for commenting. I really appreciate it!

  7. The following was written by Jillian on July 4, 2012

    Haunting and beautifully written.

  8. The following was written by Antonio Franco on September 18, 2012

    Beautiful choice of words to express the off-stage feelings of a grieving survivor.