A story from Thursday, February 24, 2011

Special Day

It must be a special day, he thought. It was so rare now to see his parents in the same room. “We have something to tell you,” Dad said.

7 Critiques to "Special Day"

  1. The following was written by Mike Jackson on February 24, 2011

    Great story.
    Certainly a day that he was going to remember.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 25, 2011

    A cleverly written story which encourages the reader to write their own ending.

  3. The following was written by Kate Giaquinto on March 19, 2011

    I like the ending….my mind wanders with possible outcomes!

  4. The following was written by Meliza on March 20, 2011

    I agree with Gayle. This story is great, and allows the reader to write their own ending. I am hoping for the best!

  5. The following was written by Robert B on March 21, 2011

    Excelent ending. I think it points to a more positive outcome.

  6. The following was written by Morgan Barry on March 21, 2011

    Exactly the memory I have when my parents told me they were getting divorced

  7. The following was written by Rob on July 6, 2011

    Heartbreaking either way – poor kid! Nicely done.