A story from Friday, August 6, 2010

Spaghetti

Sunday night, half past 6. Couch. I threw paper. He threw rock. “Crap.” I smiled. “Thanks for making dinner.” Kiss on my forehead, apron on.

4 Critiques to "Spaghetti"

  1. The following was written by donna m. on August 6, 2010

    love the jan-ken-po theme…

  2. The following was written by Patricia Tully on August 7, 2010

    I can just see the two of you having this exchange. Love it!

  3. The following was written by babette P on August 8, 2010

    Love that its flash fiction! It’s go a kind of haibun feel, part story/part poetry.

  4. The following was written by Elroy Tate on August 9, 2010

    Simple story. It’s very good.