A story from Thursday, December 23, 2010

Solitary Intrusion

Turning out lights to see the stars through the window, she said to herself, “I love winter’s darkness.” “Me too,” he said from the shadows.

4 Critiques to "Solitary Intrusion"

  1. The following was written by Renee Reese on December 28, 2010

    Love it! It’s so simple and opens up so many possibilities!!!

  2. The following was written by Mom on December 28, 2010

    I really like to read how your imagination works. And to express it in 140 words is amazing to me. Thank you for shareing your impression with me.

  3. The following was written by dana on January 13, 2011

    Oh, to have 140 words available to me as a writer…. Thanks, Mom! :)

    Thank you too, Renee!

  4. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on March 29, 2011

    Love the image of seeing stars through the window as she turns out the lights. Makes me imagine she’s in some lovely vacation home up north.

    And thank you for the story comment!