Turning out lights to see the stars through the window, she said to herself, “I love winter’s darkness.” “Me too,” he said from the shadows.
Turning out lights to see the stars through the window, she said to herself, “I love winter’s darkness.” “Me too,” he said from the shadows.
4 Critiques to "Solitary Intrusion"
Love it! It’s so simple and opens up so many possibilities!!!
I really like to read how your imagination works. And to express it in 140 words is amazing to me. Thank you for shareing your impression with me.
Oh, to have 140 words available to me as a writer…. Thanks, Mom!
Thank you too, Renee!
Love the image of seeing stars through the window as she turns out the lights. Makes me imagine she’s in some lovely vacation home up north.
And thank you for the story comment!