A story from Thursday, January 13, 2011

Sleep Deprivation

The pilot stares into the cloudscape beyond the flight deck and sees his childhood dog run in front of the plane. He doesn’t want to hit it.

3 Critiques to "Sleep Deprivation"

  1. The following was written by Maya on January 13, 2011

    You have quite an active imagination. The title neatly ties the story together.

  2. The following was written by dana on January 13, 2011

    Wow! This is fabulous, @blueberrio! (I’m guessing that’s NOT your real name….)

    Almost haunting. And disturbing, seeing the plane dive out of the way. Opens up so many possibilities as to what happens next.

    Bravo.

  3. The following was written by Maya on January 13, 2011

    You have quite an active imagination. The title neatly ties it all together.