A story from Thursday, March 31, 2011

Shepherd Mix

His heart sank when that damn kid answered the door. Clearing his throat, he cradled the limp rabbit and fumbled for a five from his wallet.

2 Critiques to "Shepherd Mix"

  1. The following was written by Tucker on March 31, 2011

    Every verb in this is pitch perfect.

  2. The following was written by dana on April 1, 2011

    Love Tucker’s critique for this. And the cinematic vision of the fellow with the limp rabbit, trying to balance it without dropping it, as he struggles to grab a five from his wallet. And of course the kid has huge, pleading eyes, right?