A story from Thursday, November 3, 2011

Sandcastle

It was the world’s most beautiful sandcastle. But still she frowned. “No, no,” she said. “Wait,” I protested, but she kicked it down again.

One Critique of "Sandcastle"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 3, 2011

    There’s just no pleasing some people is there? The problem is sometimes they bring us (or our sandcastles) down with them. Nice work!