A story from Thursday, October 14, 2010

Sakura

Pink and white cherry blossoms fell all around her. Standing there, quietly, a smile on her face. He bent on a knee. Her answer, his future.

3 Critiques to "Sakura"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 15, 2010

    This small story is superbly set up, using the landscape to conjure a picture of the lady, and ending with enticing anticipation.

  2. The following was written by Rita L. Smith on October 15, 2010

    I like the imagery of this tiny story. It gives the reader exactly what one needs to live the scene.

  3. The following was written by joy on October 19, 2010

    Thank you for the comments! :)