A story from Friday, January 21, 2011

Rite of Passage

A shot rang out in the forest. Birds scattered from the trees like a cloud of noisy ashes. The deer fell bleeding, and the boy became a man.

2 Critiques to "Rite of Passage"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 21, 2011

    A succinct description of a concept which could easily become a much longer story.

  2. The following was written by Peter on January 23, 2011

    Good but trite simply because it’s such an overdone subject.