A story from Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Revenge

He would not laugh again. She lifted the rifle to her shoulder, stroked the trigger and fired. He fell. The attendant handed her a goldfish.

3 Critiques to "Revenge"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 9, 2011

    LOL! Love the twist. Well done!

  2. The following was written by Rosalind Smith-Nazilli on November 9, 2011

    Thank you very much. Appreciate you taking the time..x

  3. The following was written by @faerieknight on November 13, 2011

    it took me the longest time to finally get this – once I did I Love it!!! very good