Retirement

The rest home was like grade school: Needed permission for the bathroom, to stay up, to eat what she wanted. Thus, Pearl threw a tantrum.

  • written by: Charley Daveler

2 Critiques to "Retirement"

  1. @faerieknight's critique:

    if you’re going to be treated like a child, why not act like a child? very good

    This critique was added on November 13, 2011 at 7:16 pm
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  2. Amy Tripp's critique:

    Yep, I can definitely see that. LOL. Great job!

    This critique was added on November 15, 2011 at 12:00 pm
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