A story from Monday, October 11, 2010

Reflected

I saw my hair spread across the pillow in his eyes and knew I was beautiful like starlight, needed like water, as much his as his own heart.

2 Critiques to "Reflected"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 12, 2010

    A lovely story that illustrates the how fullfilled a person feels when they are loved by someone else. A particularly nice touch that she sees herself reflected in his eyes.

  2. The following was written by Brittney on October 12, 2010

    Thank you Gayle. I’m glad that the feeling I wrote carried through the words.