A story from Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Reddening Sun

A druid led his son into a henge. ‘Days shorten. The sun is ailing,’ he said. ‘Can we heal it?’ asked the boy. The druid raised a knife.

2 Critiques to "Reddening Sun"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 20, 2011

    Great job building tension! I have to say, I’m glad you stopped where you did – I would have had to close my eyes for the rest!

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on September 21, 2011

    Dark but effective. Great story!