A story from Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Quick Judgement

Her date arrived late, his suit caked in dirt. She left with barely a hello. Later on the news was her date. He’d saved a small boy’s life.

4 Critiques to "Quick Judgement"

  1. The following was written by will shoemaker on February 23, 2011

    hate when that happens. nice story.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 24, 2011

    Great story composition, from set up through crisis to denouement. However, I stumbled a little on the third sentence and wondered if it flowed better as ‘Later her date was on the news’.

  3. The following was written by joy on February 27, 2011

    Wonderful story on how not to judge people by initial appearances. :)

  4. The following was written by Joey Burns on March 21, 2011

    Instant gratification is not real life. A premature judgment is a finger pointing forward and three pointing back.