The animals won the war, abolished capitalism, and replaced it with the law of the jungle. I was surprised at how little difference it made.
I like this Animal Farm version. Well done!
I’m the author of this story. Thanks One Forty Fiction for selecting it! A word of context: Although this story can stand alone, like all my Twitter fiction it is an unofficial and unauthorized “sequel” to a prior Twitter story by a different author, @VeryShortStory. Here’s the link to the original tale that inspired my story: https://twitter.com/VeryShortStory/status/7183100702367744
A truism, and a sadness.
I like this very much! It works both as a stand-alone story and as a sequel. Very amusing conclusion, given our current economic ills.