A story from Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Possessive

Their lips pressed together like a miracle. She waited her entire life for this. She hasn’t any idea of the nightmare her life is to become.

5 Critiques to "Possessive"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 23, 2011

    Oh! That hurts to even think about. Great job writing this.

  2. The following was written by Pat St. Pierre on November 23, 2011

    Elaine,

    Wonderful job.You could write a crime show with that premise.

  3. The following was written by Frankie on November 23, 2011

    Amazing! You said so much in just a few words. Love this.

  4. The following was written by Sydney on November 23, 2011

    I love this!

  5. The following was written by G. K. Adams on November 24, 2011

    A large dose of reality here. I like it. Well done.