A story from Friday, January 11, 2013

Please Leave

My eyes met his as he dug the blade in. I saw sorrow; he saw fear. His buddy yelled, “Let’s go.” I prayed these burglars left my child alone.

One Critique of "Please Leave"

  1. The following was written by Ian Russell on January 31, 2013

    Heart wrenching. Even in this short length I can vividly feel the emotions going through the people. I really hope that the child will be all right.