A story from Friday, June 10, 2011

Personal

“I found this box in your closet. Personal?” Amy asked. Mom smiled and said, “Your first tooth, your first scribble and a leaf you picked.”

4 Critiques to "Personal"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 10, 2011

    Awww.Very sweet!

  2. The following was written by Tucker on June 10, 2011

    Heartwarming. My mom’s got a box just like that.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 11, 2011

    You build the tension; Mum’s personal possession discovered and then a wonderful ending.

  4. The following was written by Anita S on June 13, 2011

    That is so beautiful. Just like the bonding between the mother and child.