A story from Thursday, September 22, 2011

Perfect Symmetry

Frank’s time came at autumnal equinox. Awoken at sunrise by the hand of a beautiful woman; killed at sunset by the hand of his wife.

2 Critiques to "Perfect Symmetry"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 23, 2011

    I really like the times of the day corresponding with awakening and death. Nice job!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 26, 2011

    Clever use of the short time span to to give impact to Frank’s predicament.