A story from Thursday, October 6, 2011

Parting Ways

He had never been there before—in the concaves of her body. But she didn’t stop him today, ironically, when she was about to walk away.

3 Critiques to "Parting Ways"

  1. The following was written by Aprajita on October 6, 2011

    you are great with less words..as always.

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on October 6, 2011

    This story is absolutely beautiful.

  3. The following was written by aprajita on October 7, 2011

    This rhymes too..wonderful