A story from Friday, January 7, 2011

Parenting?

After the sixth diaper change, Jane threw her hands in the air. “I give up! You’re too hard to care for.” The doll fell on its side. “Mama!”

4 Critiques to "Parenting?"

  1. The following was written by dana on January 7, 2011

    Ha! I cringed…and then was relieved and entertained when the DOLL fell, and not a real baby. Nicely told.

  2. The following was written by Lisa Tang Liu on January 7, 2011

    Delightful. I love the twist.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 7, 2011

    Very clever, what an unexpected ending.

  4. The following was written by joy on January 9, 2011

    Thank you all for the kind comments. :)