A story from Friday, February 11, 2011

Pancakes, with love

She awoke to syrup on her arm and a plate held by little sticky fingers. “Happy Valentine’s Day, mommy.” A bite was missing from the heart.

6 Critiques to "Pancakes, with love"

  1. The following was written by April on February 11, 2011

    This made me go “awww” Love it!

  2. The following was written by donna m. on February 11, 2011

    Me too! Made me go “awwwww….” and I’m getting teary…..

  3. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on February 11, 2011

    Adorable and sweet. Lovely. :)

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 12, 2011

    A wonderful story Joy. Now that really is true love.

  5. The following was written by Mike Jackson on February 12, 2011

    A great little story. I really enjoyed it. I got a clear picture in my head of the ‘breakfast in bed’ scene.

  6. The following was written by joy on February 14, 2011

    Thanks for all the very sweet comments! :)