A story from Monday, June 18, 2012

Overhead

As the spaceships flew over, mothers pointed. “Look, honey. What’s that?” Little boys waved, excited. Then the bombs started falling.

3 Critiques to "Overhead"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 18, 2012

    I can just imagine people looking up first interested and then afraid.

    • The following was written by rscott on June 19, 2012

      Best opening ever.

  2. The following was written by Evert Asberg on June 21, 2012

    Things going to pieces… Brilliant story.

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