A story from Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Oops

“Yes!” she cried, excited and giddy. “But I didn’t ask a question.” I was down on one knee, searching for my contact lens. Oh. No.

4 Critiques to "Oops"

  1. The following was written by billgncs on September 5, 2012

    I laughed out loud at this.

    with this lens I thee wed…..

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 6, 2012

    A well written story that leaves the reader running past the finish line and on to what comes next.

  3. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on September 6, 2012

    This creates a hilarious image in my head. Really well written! (:

  4. The following was written by Jan Brown on September 7, 2012

    Thank you for the critiques, my friends!