“Yes!” she cried, excited and giddy. “But I didn’t ask a question.” I was down on one knee, searching for my contact lens. Oh. No.
I laughed out loud at this.
with this lens I thee wed…..
A well written story that leaves the reader running past the finish line and on to what comes next.
This creates a hilarious image in my head. Really well written! (:
Thank you for the critiques, my friends!