A story from Monday, July 15, 2013

Not Yet

The plague comes. Power becomes extinct. Empires crumple. The end is nigh. “Not yet,” she says, her fingers flying over the keys. “Not yet.”

3 Critiques to "Not Yet"

  1. The following was written by Ben Mines on July 15, 2013

    I really like this. Sometimes ambiguity is a cope out but not here. The ambiguity is intriguing. There’s amble room for meaningful speculation. What IS she doing? Putting the finishing touches on a masterpiece? Trying to send a message containing the solution to the impending apocalypse to someone still in a position to do something? Or just a last chat line to a loved one? There is no definite answer.

  2. The following was written by Von Rupert on July 15, 2013

    Hi Heather! I really liked this. So much space for interpretation. I think your MC is an author, trying to keep ahead of her strong willed characters who are heck-bent on destroying their world.

  3. The following was written by Charlotte West on February 6, 2014

    I liked this. It made me wonder about her motivation. Why was she typing so quickly? Disaster? Or deadline? Only the author knows for sure.