A story from Thursday, November 18, 2010

9:00 Lie

She rolls the glass in her hand, ice shards swimming in gin, and promises herself and God: just two more drinks tonight.

2 Critiques to "9:00 Lie"

  1. The following was written by Slee Brown on November 18, 2010

    I can see it happening before my eyes.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on November 18, 2010

    A cleverly descriptive study in so few words. We can almost feel the pain of the protagonist.