He arrived to pick them up from the hospital. Her room was empty. “She said she’s sorry,” the nurse said as she handed him the baby.
This packs a heck of a punch.
This one is GREAT! Ouch, ouch. Nicely done!
Great twist. Loved it.
A very well rounded story with a dynamic plot.
How sad. Well done.
That is very powerful! Great!
Well done! Shocking.
The reality of abandonment at the beginning like that illustrates her lack of strength. So sad.