A story from Monday, August 13, 2012

My Biggest Regret

When I eat clementines I see that time in your bed when you fed me by hand, slowly. To think I broke it off with you through text message.

2 Critiques to "My Biggest Regret"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 14, 2012

    The imagery of being hand fed clementines in bed is a good contrast to the text message and heightensthe severity of that action.

  2. The following was written by H. M. Brown on August 20, 2012

    Thank you! I wanted the ending to be somewhat jarring. I’m glad the juxtaposition of the actions came across :)

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