When I eat clementines I see that time in your bed when you fed me by hand, slowly. To think I broke it off with you through text message.
The imagery of being hand fed clementines in bed is a good contrast to the text message and heightensthe severity of that action.
Thank you! I wanted the ending to be somewhat jarring. I’m glad the juxtaposition of the actions came across
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