A story from Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Mrs. Claus

Pink dawn and jingling sleigh bells wake her. She sits in bed and waits for footsteps on the stairs. Her gift doesn’t fit under the tree.

5 Critiques to "Mrs. Claus"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 16, 2011

    I really love this. You use your imagery so well to appeal to the senses. Great job!!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on November 17, 2011

    So funny, I bet Santa can’t wait to get up the stairs.

  3. The following was written by Maya on November 17, 2011

    Great imagery. Imaginative and sweet.

  4. The following was written by Sydney on November 21, 2011

    Aw :)

  5. The following was written by Evert Asberg on January 10, 2012

    I missed this one, very funny!