A story from Friday, September 16, 2011

Moving In and Moving On

He dropped the last box onto the dorm room floor, and watched his parents drive away. He’d never belong in just one place, ever again.

3 Critiques to "Moving In and Moving On"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 19, 2011

    Well done. It contains the fear and excitement any college freshman would feel.

  2. The following was written by Spencer Black on October 10, 2011

    I’m sure a lot can relate to this, but I guess it really hits home with me (no pun intended) as this happened to me just a few years ago and I’m still not used to not being “home”.

    This piece is simple but very well done!

    • The following was written by Lauri Griffin on April 7, 2012

      Thank you Amy and Spencer for your kind critiques. And Spencer, it does get easier, but yeah – you never really belong in only one place ever again.

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