A story from Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Morning After

He found her on the kitchen floor, slumped against the bag of kibble. “I went to fill his bowl,” she said. “And then I remembered.”

3 Critiques to "Morning After"

  1. The following was written by Liam Wilkinson on October 20, 2010

    And so I bend down and recover the pieces of my heart… A beautifully rendered, moving scene that so many of us know too well.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 21, 2010

    How fitting it is that a story read in a moment describes so well a sadness felt in a moment.

  3. The following was written by Sam on March 21, 2011

    Wow, I’ve been there a time or two. It’s horrible, it really is, and your story captures it, though it manages to do so beautifully.