Midnight Crossing

Coyotes lead. We quickly ford the shallows. Snip and pull. The fence parts easily. A real coyote howls. I clutch papers with my new name.

  • written by: Bill Backstrom

2 Critiques to "Midnight Crossing"

  1. Amy Tripp's critique:

    A well written ficlet touching on a hot-button topic. Nice job building the tension.

    This critique was added on December 15, 2011 at 9:55 am
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  2. Jan B.'s critique:

    Well done. I wonder which coyote is more dangerous — the human or canine?

    This critique was added on December 15, 2011 at 1:55 pm
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