A story from Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Lost Verse

He wrote poems and she said she’d look them over. In her closet, dust gathered like mountain snow on the paper.

3 Critiques to "Lost Verse"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 22, 2011

    I like the dust/snow imagery. I felt bad for the husband/lover for the callous way she dealt with his work. But then I felt worse when I started imagining the poet to be her teenage son.

    See, your words made me think, and that’s the most we can ask of our creations. :)

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 23, 2011

    A story that really packs a punch.

  3. The following was written by Aaron Rudolph on June 29, 2011

    Thank you Amy and Gayle. Your comments are awesome!