A story from Monday, May 9, 2011

Lost

He didn’t crave the money or the fix. He just wanted to look someone in the eyes; for someone to gaze back. His sign said LOST, and he was.

5 Critiques to "Lost"

  1. The following was written by Bren Searles on May 9, 2011

    This story brought to mind a homeless person on a street corner who just needed human acknowledgement of their existence. Very thought provoking.

  2. The following was written by Kevin Ray on May 9, 2011

    I love this!

  3. The following was written by Kate DeAmour on May 9, 2011

    Very moving and powerful. Nicely done.

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 10, 2011

    This tiny story epitomises the plight of so many people, addicts or homeless; it cuts to the core of their problem. You have said so much in so little.

  5. The following was written by Amy Tripp on May 10, 2011

    Heartbreaking and poignant. So much emotion in so few words. Bravo!