A story from Monday, December 13, 2010

Looped

Only the caustic-cold, off-blue, computer-screen glow lights my bedroom now. I open iTunes, double-click our song, and select “Repeat.”

5 Critiques to "Looped"

  1. The following was written by dk on December 13, 2010

    Nice…

  2. The following was written by Mike on December 13, 2010

    Nicely sums up a timeless feeling / event in a modern setting. Well done!

  3. The following was written by Mollie on December 13, 2010

    Nice prose. It matches up with my life now in some ways- although I could never put it so well. Recent work?

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on December 14, 2010

    A succinct portrayal of pathetic sadness.

  5. The following was written by Alice on January 5, 2011

    Spectacular 21st Century Haiku.

    Intense image.