Only the caustic-cold, off-blue, computer-screen glow lights my bedroom now. I open iTunes, double-click our song, and select “Repeat.”
Nicely sums up a timeless feeling / event in a modern setting. Well done!
Nice prose. It matches up with my life now in some ways- although I could never put it so well. Recent work?
A succinct portrayal of pathetic sadness.
Spectacular 21st Century Haiku.