A story from Monday, January 3, 2011

Little Billy

Three years later we were struck sick to discover that Little Billy had just been very good at playing hide and seek.

7 Critiques to "Little Billy"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 4, 2011

    Poor Little Billy! It took me a couple of readings to get it, but now that I have, it’s brilliant.

  2. The following was written by Shortzmag on January 4, 2011

    Haha… Thanks! :)))

  3. The following was written by Maya on January 4, 2011

    This was my favorite on Shortmagz blog. Great story. The editors made a great choice.

  4. The following was written by Shortzmag on January 7, 2011

    Thanks Maya! :)

  5. The following was written by dana on January 7, 2011

    Wow. How sad. I’m picturing Bones heading in to investigate…. And/or the opening of one of those old freezers, abandoned in a field somewhere, revealing Billy’s super-secret hiding space.

  6. The following was written by Lisa Tang Liu on January 7, 2011

    It reminds me of the film The Orphanage. Great job.

  7. The following was written by Shortzmag on February 2, 2011

    Hahaha… thanks for all the comments :) Wow!