A story from Friday, August 3, 2012

Life in a Moment

Our eyes meet. I see passion, pitter-pattering feet, and greying hair. You get off the bus anyway. Third time I’ve fallen for you this week.

4 Critiques to "Life in a Moment"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 3, 2012

    Unrequited love – a good example of shown not tell.

  2. The following was written by Jan Brown on August 4, 2012

    A lovely story!

  3. The following was written by Austin Bender on August 5, 2012

    Great story. Hasn’t that happened to us all?

  4. The following was written by Victoria on September 12, 2012

    This is so sweet and so full of emotion!