A story from Monday, January 2, 2012

Liar

Tears fell as she wept over the stolen jewels and smashed wedding photos. The broken glass from the bedroom window was scattered. Outside.

3 Critiques to "Liar"

  1. The following was written by Evert Asberg on January 2, 2012

    Well done! The last word explains it all.

  2. The following was written by Lovely_Lici on January 4, 2012

    Love the story. I’d love to read the short story version.

  3. The following was written by Ben on January 26, 2012

    I like this. But I’m slightly troubled: Why didn’t her treacherous lover pilfer her jewels and walk out the front door?