A story from Thursday, August 4, 2011

Last Snack

The fragrance of almonds pervaded the kitchen. The last flavor he’d taste, she thought. Smiling, she carried the cookies up to the bedroom.

4 Critiques to "Last Snack"

  1. The following was written by Tucker on August 4, 2011

    MMMM, Cyanide-y!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beverisge on August 4, 2011

    A strong story with powerful undertones; I can only wonder at what dastardly deeds have brought him to this grisly fate.

  3. The following was written by Amy Tripp on August 5, 2011

    Cyanide crumbs in the bed. Oh No!! LOL. Great job!

  4. The following was written by Yvonne Arnzen on August 7, 2011

    Very mysterious…. I like!