A story from Monday, February 7, 2011

Language of Love

A tall pale man places his stethoscope on her black skin and smiles. She blushes and lowers her eyes as the Nigerian sun breaks the horizon.

4 Critiques to "Language of Love"

  1. The following was written by dana on February 7, 2011

    Love the language in this one: quite lovely.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 8, 2011

    A wonderfully economic use of words. You have described character, setting and mood; so much in such a small and delightful story.

  3. The following was written by Wes Plinke on February 8, 2011

    Thank you! As a medical student writing is not something I often have time to do. I’m glad you liked it!

  4. The following was written by joy on February 9, 2011

    Wonderfully written. I read it twice and still smiled.