A story from Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Landed

You kissed me in the elevator that day. You kissed me and then I loved you so much I forgot I couldn’t, until I landed, and he picked me up.

3 Critiques to "Landed"

  1. The following was written by Chunk on September 17, 2010

    Very nice… what goes up, must come down at some point. Love the elevator metaphor.

  2. The following was written by joy on September 17, 2010

    I got the impression the person that was kissed was kissed by someone other than her significant other. Ooh, saucy. I liked it.

  3. The following was written by Robyn on September 18, 2010

    This is beautiful in its sense of the forbidden love.