6 Critiques to "Labour of Love"

1. Maya's critique:

   What a cute little love story! Bravo!

   This critique was added on May 10, 2011 at 12:35 pm

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2. Amy Tripp's critique:

   So touching. Great job!

   This critique was added on May 10, 2011 at 3:10 pm

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3. Maria Kelly's critique:

   Beautiful and haunting. Great little slice of life, Gayle!

   This critique was added on May 10, 2011 at 5:51 pm

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4. David Vernon's critique:

   Cleverly crafted! Beaut sentiment.

   This critique was added on May 10, 2011 at 9:21 pm

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5. Lisa Tang Liu's critique:

   Heartbreaking story skillfully told with understatement.

   This critique was added on May 12, 2011 at 12:47 am

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6. joy's critique:

   Aww…I read this and made this exact sound. The title suits the story perfectly.

   This critique was added on May 17, 2011 at 9:16 pm

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