A story from Thursday, October 20, 2011

It Will, Once You Leave

“I hope your day gets better,” said her husband, hovering in the front door. “Me too,” she said, eyes shut tight. The door closed softly.

One Critique of "It Will, Once You Leave"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on October 20, 2011

    With just a few well chosen words, you created an entire world populated by two fleshed out characters. Wonderful job!