A story from Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Indecision

He swore he wanted her to go, and that gave her strength, and so she hated him for walking beside her window right to the end of the platform.

2 Critiques to "Indecision"

  1. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on November 22, 2012

    This is a wonderfully told story, Ben. The raw sorrow and resentment is clear.

  2. The following was written by Steve B on November 26, 2012

    I like it, the tension between what we say, and what we do. Being noble, but not having the strength to be honest.