A story from Tuesday, September 13, 2011


Her boyfriend drank coffee black, ate pancakes cold without syrup or jam. He took no pleasure in his food. Feeling their future, she left.

3 Critiques to "Incompatibility"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 13, 2011

    Sometimes the differences make life interesting, sometimes they make it unbearable.

    Nice, succinct story. I very much enjoyed it.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 13, 2011

    You’ve produced a powerful story from something very simple.

  3. The following was written by Spencer Black on September 14, 2011

    Is it bad that I feel a little bad for the boyfriend? I understand the girl’s actions, but. But! That’s just it. haha I don’t know! It’s definitely making me think. Enjoying it well after reading. :)