A story from Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Incompatibility

Her boyfriend drank coffee black, ate pancakes cold without syrup or jam. He took no pleasure in his food. Feeling their future, she left.

3 Critiques to "Incompatibility"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 13, 2011

    Sometimes the differences make life interesting, sometimes they make it unbearable.

    Nice, succinct story. I very much enjoyed it.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 13, 2011

    You’ve produced a powerful story from something very simple.

  3. The following was written by Spencer Black on September 14, 2011

    Is it bad that I feel a little bad for the boyfriend? I understand the girl’s actions, but. But! That’s just it. haha I don’t know! It’s definitely making me think. Enjoying it well after reading. :)