A story from Monday, August 8, 2011

In the Dark

The darkness swallows me. Where’s the door? “Help!” The knob rattles. A small light floods the room. “It’s okay, I’m here,” Mom soothes.

4 Critiques to "In the Dark"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on August 8, 2011

    Very nice!
    Sometimes I don’t think parents realize just how important those nightly reassurances can be.

  2. The following was written by J on August 8, 2011

    I love it!!! Where is a publisher for this writer??? I would pay good money to read more of her musings/writings!!!

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 8, 2011

    Clever wording; taking us from a potential horror story to a mother’s love.

  4. The following was written by Becky on August 10, 2011

    Thanks for the read and critiques!