A story from Monday, October 3, 2011

In the Bleak Midwinter

Department store Santa was the only job he could get. He looked up and saw his daughter and his ex. How good was his disguise?

3 Critiques to "In the Bleak Midwinter"

  1. The following was written by Jan B. on October 3, 2011

    This story resonates with a heartfelt reality. Makes me hope that his ex appreciates the effort, and that his child sees only the jolly benefactor of her sugarplum-laced dreams.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 3, 2011

    This small story is jam packed with tension, each sentence has its own crisis.

  3. The following was written by Kim Tatam on October 6, 2011

    Fabulous! Left me imagining a huge backstory and wanting the sequel.